On Fri, 23 Nov 2018 17:13:39 -0500, John W Kennedy
Post by John W KennedyPost by Paul S PersonOn Thu, 22 Nov 2018 23:53:28 -0500, John W Kennedy
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Post by Paul S PersonSo, does the "femspeak" version print the poetry left-justified and
all run together or what?
Its set up on this sort of
arrangement with no effort beyond the
merely typographic to justify
its being called verse.
So, it is left-justified with each line indented? The NEB would look
Its set up on this sort of
arrangement with no effort beyond the
merely typographic to justify
its being called verse.
taking the second line as full-width so a center can be found.
So, what were you expecting?
I have no idea about the left margin.
I expect the lineation to have some informational or aesthetic purpose,
and something reflecting the original other-language text.
Well, that's OK, because, exercising my one true talent (getting
things completely wrong when I rely on memory and don't check), I
managed to be 100% wrong.
The /actual/ NEB pattern may or may not be intended to serve an
aesthetic purpose:
The whole thing is indented,
and verses tend to be split between lines,
usually, but not always, in phrases.
But some verses are split and also indented,
usually those with a repetition/expansion of the idea
New versus can then continue at the same level
for quite some time
or even drop to a third level.
But it must not be believed that
only /in/dents are used, for sometimes
the next line moves back out.
And, of course, a new verse can begin
and stay a previous indent.
which is certainly more varied and so less boring than every line
starting at the same left position, even if it is an indent from the
prose text.
Note that blank lines (indicating new stanzas) can occur at /any/
level.
The rules used appear to be known only to whoever determined the
style. They are not obvious upon examination of the text.
Although it seems at first that an informational purpose may exist,
the fact is that any of the patterns above can occur at any time. A
verse consisting of two non-repetitive clauses can be (or not be)
indented just as one with a repetitive structure can. New verses, even
at the start of a stanza, can start at any indent level. And
"outdents", so to speak, also occur, from time to time.
So indentation does not really imply subordination, nor the lack of it
equality.
Sorry for any confusion caused by my error.
I have /no/ idea why I thought they were, in any way, centered, when
they clearly are not.
--
"I begin to envy Petronius."
"I have envied him long since."